拜托大家帮忙下，英文一直订正错误。

yorki

这个帮我订正下，我不知道有错吗？感激不尽。

1.因为最近我一直晚上出去
because recently this few days I often hang out at night.

2. 我原谅了我的母亲并解释说，我最近晚上一直出去是因为去朋友家借书。
i forgive my mother and explained recently this few days I often hang out at night because I want went to my friend's house to borrow story books.

3.可是如果她继续再偷看我的短信息，我将不会再原谅她。
but if she continue peek at my messages again, I will forever do not forgive her.

Bateman

1)a small box make me  very curious
2) I slowly recalled the photo album, which is all my childhood photos. I saw a picture of my photos in disneyland, I was sitting merry-go, I get strange, because I've never been to disneyland

指尖の眷恋

1. I am curious about the little box

2. I recall my photo album, it's all with my photo when I am a child. I look at a photo that appears I am at Disneyland, but I feel strange, because I have never been there.

DejaVu26

1) My curiosity was aroused when I came across a little box.
或 A little box aroused my curiosity.

2) ”我慢慢回忆相簿里的照片” 这是虾米东东？我们可以回忆童年、回忆过去，但如何回忆照片？
In the box were photos of me taken when I was little (或 when I was a little boy/girl).
I found one photo of me taken in Disneyland. I was sitting on a merry-go-round in the photo.
或 I found one photo of me sitting on a merry-go-round taken in Disneyland.
I was puzzled because I had never been to Disneyland.

juscojb

回复 4# DejaVu26

nicely translated

yorki

1) My curiosity was aroused when I came across a little box.
或 A little box aroused my curiosity. ...
DejaVu26 发表于 2012-3-11 10:48 AM

    5楼的说你改到很好，加油哦

kevin.efms

In this morning, when I went home after school, I discovered my iPhone was turned on. I remember that my iPhone was turned off before I went to college in this morning.
红红的那个in this老师一直说用到不对，要改成什么？谢谢。
yorki 发表于 2012-3-8 08:08 AM

没注意到原来你是版主......为什么变得”怪怪的“，之前的被删除......
不需要要 in：
通常在 this、last、next、every 等之前不用介词/preposition 如on、in 等，例句：
I go swimming on Sundays. I went swimming last Sunday.
I go jogging in the morning. I went jogging this morning.
We celebrate Christmas in December. We celebrate Christmas every December.


When I got home this morning, I noticed that my iPhone had been turned on. I remember(ed) (现在还是当时记得?）turning it off before I went to class this morning.

yorki

没注意到原来你是版主......为什么变得”怪怪的“，之前的被删除......
不需要要 in：
通常在 this、last ...
kevin.efms 发表于 2012-4-3 07:42 PM

    原来如此。我会记下来的，谢谢。 还有，不知道你得空吗？我刚才翻译了英文句子，可是不知道有错吗？我想请求你帮我订正，如果不能也没关系哦，谢谢你


1.因为最近我一直晚上出去
because recently this few days I often hang out at night.

2. 我原谅了我的母亲并解释说，我最近晚上一直出去是因为去朋友家借书。
i forgive my mother and explained recently this few days I often hang out at night because I want went to my friend's house to borrow story books.

3.可是如果她继续再偷看我的短信息，我将不会再原谅她。
but if she continue peek at my messages again, I will forever do not forgive her.

洋葱头/___\

1. recently 后面不用放 this few days
2.forgive 应该换成 forgave 因为你的句子多数都用past tense
  recently 后面不用放 this few days
  I want went 应写为 I went 读起来较为顺畅
3.continue 应该换成 continued 因为 if 的后面要放past tense

精良使者

回复 9# 洋葱头/___\


    赞同你的翻译。。。。。。。。。之前那些事什么的？？？？？